I would "smothen" it out a little
Except for that great
You have mastered the art of simplicity
I wish I could make something this good
And not with that attitude. Haha
Seriously though, it takes a lot of work and practice to make music but it can be quite rewarding. The best thing about Newgrounds is that there is a knowledgeable community here that you can learn from. For free even! Ask questions to whoever you can and you can be surprised what you learn. Youtube videos do a great job too. The hard part is knowing what to look for, but the more you study the more questions you'll get.
Also watch out for the NewGrounds Audio Death-Match (NGADM). There's good people you'll be able to learn from for sure there. Other contests do well like the AIM (Art-Inspired Music) contest, but I feel that the NGADM is more competitive.
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